Feel free to mark the essay at the point of the error with a specific recommendation (“run-on sentence”) or a general comment (“this sentence sounds wrong to me”). You can also simply put an “X” by any sentence that seems incorrect. See the back of WR for commonly used Correction Symbols. Further Directions for Specific Assignments Below are more detailed questions to consider when responding to individual types of essays. First, make sure that you have reviewed the description of the essay mode in the Essay Assignment Guidelines. Use at least one or two of these when responding to an essay. Do not simply answer yes or no; offer specific evidence from the text and elaborate on the reasons behind your answer.
Atlas I would like to give a small message of Diwali. “Tamso Ma Jyotirgamaya” (lead me from the darkness unto light) which means that where there is darkness light is needed. So to get rid of the darkness of sorrow we all have to light up the lamps of happiness. To get rid of darkness of disease, we have to light up the lamps of health. To get over the darkness of loss and failures, we have to light up the lamps of prosperity. And at last light up the lamps of true knowledge to get rid the darkness of ignorance’s. Thank you! (Speech Ends Here)